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Using The 5 Senses In Writing

The 5 Senses In Writing

Describing how something looks or sounds isn’t always enough to bring a story to life. Many people experience things through smells, touch, and taste. It’s our job as writers to use the 5 senses in writing to enrich our tales with vivid imagery.

In fact, the oft-forgotten 5 senses are some of the most powerful forms of description, things which can enrich a story and give it life.

If you re-read some of your favourite books there’ll no doubt be passages where the writer employers a sight and smell or taste or touch to great descriptive effect.

Often some of our most favourite books are those that employ to great effect the five senses. Books that transport us to new worlds and take us on epic adventures. And so often it is the vivid descriptions that draw us in and help us walk amongst the characters.

In this guide, we’ll take a look at the five sensory organs, look at 5 senses examples, and using the 5 senses in writing.

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  1. What Are The Five Sensory Organs?
  2. Sight
  3. Sound
  4. Touch
  5. Taste
  6. Smell
  7. 5 Senses Writing Checklist
  8. Using The 5 Senses In Writing – Exercises
  9. Adjectives For The Five Senses
  10. Other Writing Guides and Writing Tools
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What Are The Five Sensory Organs?

Before we dive into looking at the 5 senses in a writing context, let’s look at what the five sensory organs are:

  1. Eyes
  2. Ears
  3. Special receptors in the skin that enable us to touch and feel
  4. Nose
  5. Tastebuds

Combined, our five senses enable us to learn, experience and create memories. Pepsi Max, for example, always reminds me of my history lessons in college—I’d drink a can during every lesson. Think of songs too. They have an incredible ability to transport us back to moments in our past. Let’s explore things in more detail…

Sight

Perhaps the main one of 5 senses, sight often receives information first and therefore forms our initial judgements.

When it comes to using sight in writing, our stories and characters are often guided by this prime form of description. We describe what our characters see.

However, it would be nigh impossible to describe every aspect of a scene, and even if you did achieve it, nigh impossible to read.

Some of the most acclaimed writers, Dickens, in particular, approached it by picking the right details. The little things that tell us everything. Let’s look at an example of the sense of sight in writing from Great Expectations:

“There was a bookcase in the room; I saw, from the backs of the books, that they were about evidence, criminal law, criminal biography, trials, acts of parliament, and such things. The furniture was all very solid and good, like his watch-chain. It had an official look, however, and there was nothing merely ornamental to be seen. In a corner, was a little table of papers with a shaded lamp: so he seemed to bring the office home with him in that respect too, and to wheel it out of an evening and fall to work.”

This is Jagger’s office. Though he doesn’t feature, we’ve gleaned much about who he is from details like the types of books upon the shelves and the paper-filled table, suggesting he lives a busy, professional life.

Colour is another fantastic tool when it comes to sight. Dickens was known for using colours to portray emotions or themes, such as red for frustration or anger, black for death, white for purity or goodness. Using colour, particularly with themes, can add extra layers to a story.

Sound

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Sound is incredibly important when it comes to using the 5 senses in our writing. Dialogue dominates many stories, but so often little attention is paid to how characters sound when they talk. It’s strange when you think about how unique people sound, and a person’s voice makes such a difference to how we form views of them.

Something I learned not so long ago is that ducks don’t quack. They tend to grunt or even cackle. It’s easy to assume how things sound, but sometimes what we assume is wrong.

It’s always worth taking time to research. In doing so you may find new and original ways to describe the sound. Using metaphors and similes, particularly if the sound is unusual, is a great way to bring clarity to descriptions.

Another often overlooked thing is silence. Silence is an excellent tool to set the tone or build an atmosphere. A noiseless forest. A still, foggy street. Eerie.

Touch

Of all the five senses, touch is, in my view, one of the most powerful yet underrated ones, particularly when it comes to using the 5 senses in writing.

If you can convey touch in an effective way, you’ll reap the rewards.

The scope of this sense depends on the nature of the scene, but imagine, for example, walking barefoot through a forest. The softness of moss between your toes, the cool slime of mud, the pokes and scratches of sticks and stones. Such details can draw readers deeper into the story.

We’ll look at some sensory writing exercises below, but as a brief exercise now, close your eyes and pick something up. Describe how that object feels. What features does it have? The texture? Sturdiness? Width? Weight?

These little details can make all the difference when it comes to the 5 senses in writing.

Taste

5 senses in writing

Taste is the more neglected one out of the five sensory organs—when it comes to writing that is.

Just like all of the 5 senses in writing, using taste can enrich your story immensely.

How many times have you said the phrase, “It tastes like …”. So many of our memories are tied to tastes. Like I said before, Pepsi Max always reminds me of history classes in college. What tastes trigger memories for you?

If this happens to us, it happens to your characters too.

Like smell, taste can serve as a trigger for memories. For example, a husband who shared a love for apple turnovers baked by his deceased wife is reminded of her whenever he eats one.

Taste can also trigger emotions. There’ve been times when I’ve eaten food that tasted so good I bounced with glee in my chair.

Smell

We, at last, arrive at smell, though its place is no reflection on its importance when it comes to using the 5 senses in writing.

The power of smells cannot be underestimated. We smell things all of the time and those smells help to shape our impressions. What can you smell right now?

A smell helps us to form a judgement on things, such as whether something’s okay to eat. And crucially, smells can trigger vivid memories and emotions, vital tools to any writer.

Take for example the smell of marijuana and how that can incite fear in some people, yet in others provokes memories of happiness and peace.

One funny example, which has happened to a few people I know, is if when walking down the street you can smell a bad odor and see an attractive person at the same time, you associate that person with the smell and will be turned off them.

It’s happened to me before; it may have happened to you too. But regardless, it illustrates the power of smell.

Here’s an example of using the sense of smell in writing from James Joyce’s Ulysses of how smells (and tastes) can enrich prose.

Mr Leopold Bloom ate with relish the inner organs of beasts and fowls. He liked thick giblet soup, nutty gizzards, a stuffed roast heart, liverslices fried with crustcrumbs, fried hencods’ roes. Most of all he liked grilled mutton kidneys which gave to his palate a fine tang of faintly scented urine.” 

5 Senses Writing Checklist

Something I’ve sought to do to improve my use of the 5 senses in writing is to include them within the planning process. It’s good to save it until the end when you’ve plotted out your story or chapter.

What I do is read over the plan and try and place myself in the scenes. Working my way through each sense, I list everything that pops into my head.

  1. It’ll be unlikely that you need to spend too much time on sight, but taking the time to consider things in detail can provoke new and unique ideas. What little details can be included? Remember the power of specificity.
  2. Next, onto sounds. Like sights, it’s unlikely you’ll need to spend too much time on this but it’s always helpful to consider the likes of character’s voices and any usual sounds that could be featured.
  3. Smells. When it comes to smells a good starting point is to list everything that comes to mind, even mere whiffs, which can be the most telling of all. Smells can provoke memories and emotions too, like the smell of perfume could remind a character of their dead lover, and that leaves you open to describe emotions.
  4. What can your character touch or feel? How does the hilt of the sword feel in your character’s fingers? How does the touch of a vivacious woman feel to your lonely character? What information can be gleaned from the manner of a handshake?
  5. Lastly, what tastes, if any, can you include? Is your character eating? Can they taste blood after being punched in the cheek? Do they enter a room where the smell is so foetid they can taste it?

Using The 5 Senses In Writing – Exercises

Here are a few useful exercises to get into the swing of using the senses. The more you practice, the more it’ll become ingrained in the way you write.

  • One place, one sense. As the title suggests, think of a place and describe everything you can using just one sense. Challenge yourself. Pick a sense you feel you struggle with. Or do one sense, then a different one.
  • Walk and write. Take a notepad and write five headings: sight, sound, touch, taste, smell. The next time you go out, even if it’s just to the shop on the corner, write down everything you experience. The touch of the rain or breeze, how the pavement feels underfoot, snippets of passing conversation you hear, the whistle of birds, how that warm and crispy sausage roll tastes. *Warning* You may look odd stopping all the time.
  • Close your eyes and pick something up. This one was mentioned above, but it’s a powerful tool. Jot down everything you can think of.
  • Pick your favourite food and eat! This one’s a bit more fun. Take chocolate for example. Savour each bite and write down everything, from taste to texture, the sounds of it breaking in your mouth, and importantly, how it makes you feel.

Adjectives For The Five Senses

You can never have enough adjectives to help you describe the five senses. Below, you can find a pretty simple list, but it serves as a great starting point. From there you can add some of your own adjectives for the five senses.

adjectives for the five senses
Adjectives for the five senses

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8 thoughts on “Using The 5 Senses In Writing

  1. When writing about the senses, authors should be careful to avoid FILTER words (saw, heard, felt, smelled, tasted) that detract from the scene. Don’t say, “I saw the sparkling water.” Instead, make it more vivid. Leave out “saw.” We know you saw it because you are describing it to us. Tell us instead more of WHAT you are seeing. “The sparkling water bubbled as a creature from below made its way to the surface.” Same goes with using “heard,” “felt,” “smelled,” and “tasted.” Omit those words and describe those senses so people can experience what the character is experience.

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